Goldberg & Poetry Packet

My favorite writing was from the second Goldberg packet. I liked the baking a cake. Here is one of Goldberg's saying "You put them in a bowl and mix them up, but this does not make a cake". This was my favorite because you can have everything you need but you have to put them together and make it work for what you want it to.

Also, my second favorite saying from Baking a Cake is "You must add the heat and energy of your heart". This means that you have to go into to details and not just brush the surface of the subject but you should digg deeper. Explain all of the characteristics of the subject to make it more realistic.

The poetry packet on the other hand was hard for me to get into. Maybe its just me but I find it hard to get into. I really can not understand the readings it. I know that the writer/authors are trying to making us see something but I'm just not seeing the whole picture. I believe that I need to expand my mind a little more.