I found the stories within the fiction packet to be interesting. They all seemed o be very discriptive. I felt as though I was in the stories as I was reading them. They gave off very powerful words to help get into your imagination.
One particular story, when it rains it rains a river , I found to be a nice store. It kept repeating the word mud. Mud was in my head long after I finished reading the story. It's also used the words we and us alot.
Overall, I think that the stories in the fiction packet 3 were nice. They really helped me to see a way to grab readers attention by repeating certain and helping them understand the concept of my fiction story.
ok, say more, be specific and explain. 8/10
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